Chapter 12: Cry of the Hunters
Perspective: Jack
Lets go boys, are new objective is Ralph. Ralph is the beastie now, we must slay him. Move out, we need him dead. As i ran into the woods with my spear and my hunters i felt a lot of power within me and able to do whatever it takes to crush Ralph's bones just like Simon and piggy. I didn't feel bad for anyone, i feel power, yeah that's it power. I could take on 10 Ralph's if i wanted to. While running i figure how Ralph could hide. I took long hours thinking of plans to get Ralph, sending hunters to all different parts of the island. I looked at roger and said, your horrible out there when you killed piggy. He said in a stuttering voice. Ya ya thanks i wanted to kill him of course. He was getting on my nerves. Good job roger, i hope you are ready for my wrath you piece of dirt. He looked at me and smiled and said, oh trust me i am while he said that he started to work his spear into two sides sharp. I noticed him and realize he was going to do a spear in the ground and a spear in the head of the pig. I walked off like everything was calm.
The next morning i woke up with a brilliant idea. I paced for a while until bingo, i knew how to get Ralph. I got all my hunters together and told them we got to burn the whole island so that Ralph has no where to go but to us. So in about the next hours we got right to work and burnt this tree with grass all around it that let to the mountain. It started to burn and burn until it came to the point where it spread most of the island. We kept on roaming around for Ralph until we finally found him in the woods running as fast as he could. I told everyone, after him! after him! spill his blood! then everyone cheered and ran full speed. As his little legs ran i almost fell on the floor laughing because he was running like a two-year old. As we saw him get closer and closer to the beach we noticed that he fell, we all sprinted to him as quickly as possible. When we got to him as he lay on the beach. I looked up and saw a naval, officer in full uniform, basically an adult. I stood there crying my eyes out noticing that we are just kids fighting over stupid things when there are adults and other children in this world doing what is good. My heart came from crushed to a bit uncrushed but still evil in a way. I couldn't believe this was real. I kept crying and crying until we finally got in the officers transportation and left the island for good, killing Simon and piggy while doing that. I also knew we left the kid with the birthmark that was very good kid but in the end i never thought of it the way i did.
THE END
Tuesday, October 7, 2008
Sunday, October 5, 2008
Too much
Chapter 11: Castle rock
Perspective: Ralph
Roger pushed a large looking boulder and pushed it out of the way. But Piggy got hit and fell off the mountain and i then felt like time stopped as if i was alone with actual criminals. I stood there and looked at Piggy fall. And as his back hit the ground and he brain spilled out while i just stood there and watched the horror.
I can't believe this Simon and piggy die because of the horrible person jack. This is just getting way out of line. Ever since Jack became the king of the hills with his new group anyone who actually likes me gets killed, for all I know Samneric could be next, all because of me, all because Jack hates me and that jack couldn't stand that fact that we are on the island. Did i really put this on Simon and piggy, maybe just maybe. I mean Simon if we would have never gone to Jack's feast, Simon would have found us at our camp and we would probably be sleeping and everything would just be all fine and great like i wanted it to be but i guess everything doesn't go good.
Roger pushed a large looking boulder and pushed it out of the way. But Piggy got hit and fell off the mountain and i then felt like time stopped as if i was alone with actual criminals. I stood there and looked at Piggy fall. And as his back hit the ground and he brain spilled out while i just stood there and watched the horror.
The last person i could really trust and have faith in just was gone in a second. I mean Sam and Eric are taken away from me and now Piggy is died. Now I am on my own. I don’t really know what to do so I just do the first thing that came to mind. And that was to run., so I did, i could not risk dieing. I didn't want to die so i ran as fast as possible to get out of the horrible place i was in and i was losing hope of every making it home.
Perspective: Ralph
Roger pushed a large looking boulder and pushed it out of the way. But Piggy got hit and fell off the mountain and i then felt like time stopped as if i was alone with actual criminals. I stood there and looked at Piggy fall. And as his back hit the ground and he brain spilled out while i just stood there and watched the horror.
I can't believe this Simon and piggy die because of the horrible person jack. This is just getting way out of line. Ever since Jack became the king of the hills with his new group anyone who actually likes me gets killed, for all I know Samneric could be next, all because of me, all because Jack hates me and that jack couldn't stand that fact that we are on the island. Did i really put this on Simon and piggy, maybe just maybe. I mean Simon if we would have never gone to Jack's feast, Simon would have found us at our camp and we would probably be sleeping and everything would just be all fine and great like i wanted it to be but i guess everything doesn't go good.
Roger pushed a large looking boulder and pushed it out of the way. But Piggy got hit and fell off the mountain and i then felt like time stopped as if i was alone with actual criminals. I stood there and looked at Piggy fall. And as his back hit the ground and he brain spilled out while i just stood there and watched the horror.
The last person i could really trust and have faith in just was gone in a second. I mean Sam and Eric are taken away from me and now Piggy is died. Now I am on my own. I don’t really know what to do so I just do the first thing that came to mind. And that was to run., so I did, i could not risk dieing. I didn't want to die so i ran as fast as possible to get out of the horrible place i was in and i was losing hope of every making it home.
Thursday, October 2, 2008
They are just accidents...right? right.....
Chapter 10: The shell and the glasses
Perspective: Piggy
Its been a long hard day for me and ralph. We are trying to tell everyone that it was just a accident that simon died, i couldnt stop feeling the badness inside. As jack was telling everyone that it was the beast trying to diguise himself i then realized how mean the kids are getting and how hard it is for me and ralph to go through with this barmy situation. I couldnt take this and kept on telling ralph and the others that it was just an accident. Yeah that what it was a accident. I kept on hearing ralph say that we murdered simon but i didnt want to hear it and i just kept on saying excusses. As the long hard day went on we all had to feel something but we couldnt because we didnt realize how we could of just killed simon. I knew where these boys were going but didnt want to confess because i would of felt purged. As ralph and jack's camps split up i wonder if i would make it.
That night we were sleeping quitely and were all losing intrest in the signal fire. I wonder how illumination made jack and his camp could handle life the way they do. I cant believe we cant all just get along. As the whole group was quiet and ready to go to sleep we all heard a loud noise in the wind. I got worryed if something bad and big was coming at us. We all heard it was jack and his men. They came and started to fight with us. Jack eventually runs over to my area pushes me down and grabs my glasses then runs off with his boys. I was so mad i just wanted him dead. I started theologically running after him for couple steps then stopped. Ralph could not believe it and was mad too. We all including me were wondering how life would be with jack having the power of fire in his own hands.
Perspective: Piggy
Its been a long hard day for me and ralph. We are trying to tell everyone that it was just a accident that simon died, i couldnt stop feeling the badness inside. As jack was telling everyone that it was the beast trying to diguise himself i then realized how mean the kids are getting and how hard it is for me and ralph to go through with this barmy situation. I couldnt take this and kept on telling ralph and the others that it was just an accident. Yeah that what it was a accident. I kept on hearing ralph say that we murdered simon but i didnt want to hear it and i just kept on saying excusses. As the long hard day went on we all had to feel something but we couldnt because we didnt realize how we could of just killed simon. I knew where these boys were going but didnt want to confess because i would of felt purged. As ralph and jack's camps split up i wonder if i would make it.
That night we were sleeping quitely and were all losing intrest in the signal fire. I wonder how illumination made jack and his camp could handle life the way they do. I cant believe we cant all just get along. As the whole group was quiet and ready to go to sleep we all heard a loud noise in the wind. I got worryed if something bad and big was coming at us. We all heard it was jack and his men. They came and started to fight with us. Jack eventually runs over to my area pushes me down and grabs my glasses then runs off with his boys. I was so mad i just wanted him dead. I started theologically running after him for couple steps then stopped. Ralph could not believe it and was mad too. We all including me were wondering how life would be with jack having the power of fire in his own hands.
Wednesday, October 1, 2008
Brave kid at heart, Good kid at soul
Chapter 9: View to a Death
Perspective: Simon
I wake up the next day with a weird feeling. I seem to have brought my evil side with me. As the sun came up i realized two different sides of me, like i felt free on one side and trapped in another side. When my mind started spinning and my head started blanking out i knew something was wrong with me. While looking at the dried blood on my body and the fly bites and then remember what i was doing before i fell asleep. I was having a conversation with myself, but how? Hmm, i thought for a moment that it was a scary corpulent but then it poped in my head. I was talking to myself but in a more negative tone of voice like a evil side. After thinking that thought i took a long walk to sort things out. As i came pretty far on the island i noticed a dead parachute man hanging from a tree. I thought about what a parachute man would be dueing here and all of a sudden it came to me, the beastie, the objects or figures that just randomly appear from things people said they saw. I then knew what was going on. First of all the beastie is the dead parachutist and jack is going crazy about a beastie when the beastie is really a dead person.
I had to go back to the group and tell them as fast as i can. But as i came to the point where i could see them in the distance i noticed they were dancing around in a circle with roger in the middle. I rushed about to fall over because my legs hurt so bad. As soon as i got there my legs bursted so i had to crawl to tell them. I crawled to the middle of the circle, as i was in the middle yelling at the top of my lungs that there is no beastie and that its a dead parachutist. The whole group was yelling over me like they were crazy in the head. I looked around at all of them as they screamed kill the beastie. As they started to approach me i got scared. I thought as if timed stopped at that moment and i was sitting there about to be hurt really bad for all i knew. My brain then rewinded this whole adventure and for some reason in that moment i have never felt as happy in my life then right then. As then time played again i was beat bad and poked bad hearing the boys screaming kill the beastie. i knew then they thought i was the beast and as soon as my final word came out yelling please dont, i was even able to see the phosphorescence and i knew and know who the beastie is, its you guys. the beastie is inside all of yo.................( As simons final word was said a silence in simons heart gave out on him, if you just watched then you could tell simon would probably want this in the end then deal with boys who have gone brainwashed and out of their minds. ) ( Simons body was then floating like a calm peice of wood after a ship sinking. ) ( After a couple minutes every stopped and took a step back and realized it wasnt a beastie .... it was simon.... Ralph starred into the eyes of dead simon and almost cryed because of what he done and how he fell into a trap of evilness )
Simon your my best friend and i bet you would want this ... SIMON ROCKS!!!!!
Perspective: Simon
I wake up the next day with a weird feeling. I seem to have brought my evil side with me. As the sun came up i realized two different sides of me, like i felt free on one side and trapped in another side. When my mind started spinning and my head started blanking out i knew something was wrong with me. While looking at the dried blood on my body and the fly bites and then remember what i was doing before i fell asleep. I was having a conversation with myself, but how? Hmm, i thought for a moment that it was a scary corpulent but then it poped in my head. I was talking to myself but in a more negative tone of voice like a evil side. After thinking that thought i took a long walk to sort things out. As i came pretty far on the island i noticed a dead parachute man hanging from a tree. I thought about what a parachute man would be dueing here and all of a sudden it came to me, the beastie, the objects or figures that just randomly appear from things people said they saw. I then knew what was going on. First of all the beastie is the dead parachutist and jack is going crazy about a beastie when the beastie is really a dead person.
I had to go back to the group and tell them as fast as i can. But as i came to the point where i could see them in the distance i noticed they were dancing around in a circle with roger in the middle. I rushed about to fall over because my legs hurt so bad. As soon as i got there my legs bursted so i had to crawl to tell them. I crawled to the middle of the circle, as i was in the middle yelling at the top of my lungs that there is no beastie and that its a dead parachutist. The whole group was yelling over me like they were crazy in the head. I looked around at all of them as they screamed kill the beastie. As they started to approach me i got scared. I thought as if timed stopped at that moment and i was sitting there about to be hurt really bad for all i knew. My brain then rewinded this whole adventure and for some reason in that moment i have never felt as happy in my life then right then. As then time played again i was beat bad and poked bad hearing the boys screaming kill the beastie. i knew then they thought i was the beast and as soon as my final word came out yelling please dont, i was even able to see the phosphorescence and i knew and know who the beastie is, its you guys. the beastie is inside all of yo.................( As simons final word was said a silence in simons heart gave out on him, if you just watched then you could tell simon would probably want this in the end then deal with boys who have gone brainwashed and out of their minds. ) ( Simons body was then floating like a calm peice of wood after a ship sinking. ) ( After a couple minutes every stopped and took a step back and realized it wasnt a beastie .... it was simon.... Ralph starred into the eyes of dead simon and almost cryed because of what he done and how he fell into a trap of evilness )
Simon your my best friend and i bet you would want this ... SIMON ROCKS!!!!!
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